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she trembled ,could not moved,repeated announcement,she was in loss. legs were chained with stone ,  no, she could not move. she sat on waiting chair.



he was here just! just ,  half an hour ago.  she was in hurry to catch the train as usual her daily chorus . cook meal, drop kid and rush to catch local. secure entry into single ac women coach.



as the announcement was made for arrival she  saw him,is he with same. che shirt, hat and penetrating smile that even irritate her on face book. she hates him . disgusting fellow.



he directly approached her . hello . how are you, shamelessly he asked , not asked rather persuaded  to chat . 


she cant be rude in public . little smile. 


fine .my train will arrive . she thought to get rid of him.



you can catch another train.

no ,no , i feel sorry for late in duty.

thats okay but single day late cant cause any big problem ,


i will be back .


 have come to see you . 

but how you found me here ? 



hahaha platonic friends knows everything . 

he was teasing ,guessing ,i am enjoying but anyhow i was tolerating .



if it would not have been public place,surely ,he  would have found imprint of her slap .

she sigh . ok beta, just 2-3  minutes .

lher ower lip covered her uper lip.she nodded .

he was talking all nonsense things.

enquiring her personal life perhaps treating himself family member. very close to her with whom she used to share minutes details of personal life.

hooh! idiot. 

train was entering . she found relief .

now this idiot will leave her.

ok we will talk later . i will call you in evening .

i have your number.

she moved forward but he grabbed her hand .

it was shocking . how he dared . she thought to slap him hard.

but she knows ,she cant. she withdrew  herself whenever any embarrassing condition she encountered . through out  her life .

but i cant leave this train . plz understand .

miss this time . i will never come . 

just give me one life time  chance to chat .

i promise , you  will not find me second time in life . believe me ,not even in virtual world.

oh really he is unbearable ,she thought and repeated ,but we can talk in evening . i promise i will call you .

he laughed . you cant . even if you call . you know , i am moody , i rarely pick up call .

train was arrived. people were rushing .

she tried to to convince him again but he did not leave her hand .

train start moving .

she lost cool .

you are really a cheap type person i ever seen .

you treat other like your bondage slave ,servant ,ready to dance at your instance .

he laughed again .

hahaha ha .you cant understand me . 

she said nothing . 

he sat adjacent to her on waiting bench.

coffee ? she asked . 

no . just listen me. i have come across long to have last chat with you .

how is your hubby ? 

why you hate me ? 

what wrong i did with you ? 

pouring question .

plz forgive me . 

i cant rest if  you dont pardon me. 

are you hearing ? 

yea yea . believe me . i dont have any complaint with you . she told ,tried to convince though it was wrong but she was not willing to create seen .

no ,you are lying . 

you say you parson me . forgave me. 

ok ok i pardon you . 

we are now good friend .

i will unblock you .

she again lied . 

hahahaha i am not asking to unblock me.

wait . i am happy . you forgave .

lets enjoy coffee . 

i am coming .

he hurriedly went and vanished in crowd.

now this announcement.

train met with accident .

lady ac coach was crushed .

no one survived.     

she could not moved.

her heart was poundering .

she was sitting on bench .


phone ranged . her hubby .


where are you ? 


are you ok ? 


i saw on TV  train you used to catch met with accident .


i am at station. 


i was a bit late . could not catch that train . 


go  back home . take leave .


God saved you .


yea god saved me . she murmured .


she waited . she was not having his number .


first time she felt she did wrong with him .


one hour elapsed .


she moved out slowly .


reached home.


logged on facebook .


unblocked him .


thought to call him . 


tender appology for her treatment,rudeness but, but ,there, his wall was flooded with masseges.


he was no more,


one scanned copy of news.


his body was found at the bank of river, two days ago. 


normal death ,no suicide, he was sleeping over a mat .


oh !


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